Thursday, 12 December 2019
summer learnin journey day two
For this activity we had to pick some friends and ask them what the were most proud of
Tuesday, 10 December 2019
Wednesday, 4 December 2019
The dream giver
The Dream Giver
By Billie, Ilish
Task: watch the video ‘Dreamgiver.’ You then have to write a short story or piece of
descriptive writing using this video as your inspiration.
descriptive writing using this video as your inspiration.
-We are learning to be descriptive writers (paint pictures with words) so that our readers can
imagine what it is we are writing about and find our writing engaging.
imagine what it is we are writing about and find our writing engaging.
One cloudy night two kids were sleeping in their warm and cosy beds
suddenly the dream giver creeped into the old and dusty room through
the rotten window. The dream giver had a large white smelly sack that
he carried on his back.The large sack carried ten golden eggs that had
creamy liquid inside them and when they crack the ousey slime drizzles
down onto an item and all the wonderful magic dreams begins. But one of
the eggs hit the wrong item and the dream transformed into a deadly
nightmare!
suddenly the dream giver creeped into the old and dusty room through
the rotten window. The dream giver had a large white smelly sack that
he carried on his back.The large sack carried ten golden eggs that had
creamy liquid inside them and when they crack the ousey slime drizzles
down onto an item and all the wonderful magic dreams begins. But one of
the eggs hit the wrong item and the dream transformed into a deadly
nightmare!
The innocent boy woke up in a tropical forest with the sound of fluttering
wings made by the colorful butterflies which flew all around but they weren't
the only living things in the forest. When the boy looks all around he sees
skeletons with helmets and armor on but the one thing that stood out was
the big lever on top of a giant rock. And then he accidentally leaned on
the lever. All off a sudden, out of nowhere a big crack in the cave appeared
and the ground shook.
wings made by the colorful butterflies which flew all around but they weren't
the only living things in the forest. When the boy looks all around he sees
skeletons with helmets and armor on but the one thing that stood out was
the big lever on top of a giant rock. And then he accidentally leaned on
the lever. All off a sudden, out of nowhere a big crack in the cave appeared
and the ground shook.
The boy saw 2 big green colouerd eyes in the dark and heard a big loud
screaming noise that echoed through the cave. The big black creature that
looked like a Black Panther chased the boy through a forest to a big cliff
and then the dream giver dropped a seed in front of the Panther and a tree
grew really quickly. The Panther then got trapped in the tree’s roots and
then it died in the tree roots. The boy woke up and realised it was a
horrible nightmare. The dream giver knew his work was done so he flew
away into the black night sky.
screaming noise that echoed through the cave. The big black creature that
looked like a Black Panther chased the boy through a forest to a big cliff
and then the dream giver dropped a seed in front of the Panther and a tree
grew really quickly. The Panther then got trapped in the tree’s roots and
then it died in the tree roots. The boy woke up and realised it was a
horrible nightmare. The dream giver knew his work was done so he flew
away into the black night sky.
The end
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