Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi Illish, good job with your writing. It was good that you did the race and finished it even though it was cold and raining. Next time in your writing you could work on putting in more detail. Nice job. Phoebe.
Hi Phoebe, it's Ilish. Thank you for commenting on my blog. We only had a little bit of time but next time when we have a lot of time then I will.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Hi Illish, good job with your writing. It was good that you did the race and finished it even though it was cold and raining. Next time in your writing you could work on putting in more detail. Nice job. Phoebe.
ReplyDeleteHi Phoebe, it's Ilish. Thank you for commenting on my blog. We only had a little bit of time but next time when we have a lot of time then I will.
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